Authors note: this is a point of view piece written on the book The Underdogs , which is changing the perspective, from the main character named Will to a sub character named Hannah.
Wow! Just because I’m a girl doesn’t mean I shouldn’t
be out there every play. I can’t believe I’m not out there on the field, instead
were just a weak spot in the wide receiver position. It’s all his fault! That
was what I think the point of view would be if Hannah from the book The
Underdogs was the main character and not Will. If Hannah was the main
character the plot would change a lot, here’s what It might look like.
Instead of the plot having will make the make
a new football team struggle to get enough players, then lose their first 2
games and after that come all the way back to the championship. It would be
Hannah moving to Forbes, meeting Will and becoming friends. Then asking to join
the football team, struggling to play at first and blaming Will, to finally
realizing that it was for the better of the team and then go on to win the
championship.
There is lots of points in
this book where Hannah thinks very differently from Will. The two probably
disagree the most in football. One of the parts in which they disagree is after
the game, and Hannah gets upset with Will because she sat out the final play.
On this play Will and the coach thought we really need this and Hannah hasn’t
quite got this and sat her out. But on Hannah side it looks like this, why do
they do this, I thought he promised me a chance, I shouldn’t have trusted him! Throughout
the book it was that easy to tell they had very different point of views.
Back when Mike Lupica was
writing this book, if he did decide to write it in Hannah’s perspective the
whole book would have changed from the readers point of view. By this I mean
that most of the plot would be there, but when they win a game instead of
having the book seem like there all happy, it could have had Hannah
complaining. Over all every ones point of view would be different but if the
author had chosen Hannah it would have changed everything no doubt.
After all you can see and
tell that everyone has a different point of view on everything, especially
thing that matter most. For instance, like sports if they really matter to you
then you always think you should be out there making the play that counts. This
point of view makes more sense after you change something in the book. If you
were to rewrite the book with a sub character from this book a lot would be a
lot different. That’s why you always have to keep your head up even if you are
not first in line.
Overall you did a good job on point of view but your grammar wasn't great so you may want to edit it in other areas.
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